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Commentary Essay

Hello every body my name is phabian phillips.I want to ask every body that is listen a question.Have you ever said you dont care, well it time to stop.There are many people in this would that needs are help i guess the real questoin is,do americans care about others and thier contrys.If so would you give a person something that you bought that you dont need you wanted it?Well sometimes americans care someties they dont,it depends on what type of life they lived.

Some people say they care so say they dont but is it tru.Like you can have a good american citizen that will donate to people and other contrys.Then you have the ones that dont even care about the bad conditions.To me i think it stupid for peolpe not to care,if it was you would want them to help you.Like if you was homeless and you know somebody that had everything you would want them to help,you even you didnt know them u wonld still want it.So who would you want somebody that cares or somebody that dont care.I think americans should share or care because we have every thing and other contrys have nothing.

Like come on every body it should hurt to just help.All you have to do is give somebody something so they can help others.Its not even a hard job it should not hurt doing good. They need more help then we do, you have lots and they have nothing. Many people out there are good people and smart people that need help. So would you take some time out of you life and just help the once that need it. There are many people out there that are poor and they are good people.

Before we help the real question is to all you other counties is do you need are help? Waht do you need for us to do for you. Speak up if you need are help. There are so many people out here willing to help and you do speak up. So for all you coutrys out there that need help you need to come and speak up and we will help. Iam Phabian Phillips thats how i feel about the unfareness about the other countries being treated unfared. Thank you for taking your time reading this.